Feedback on our Teen Angst pitch

After our pitch we got some feedback from our class

They said:

·         They liked the fact that our protagonist was a male

·         They liked our transition shots – where the titles come up

·         They liked our production company and logo

 They said we could improve:

·         On how detailed our plot is

·         How the opening starts

·         Which sort of shots we use

Our production company and logo went down very well they liked

·         That the background was a cinema

·         The red stereotypical chairs

·         That our logo appeared on the screen

·         That the font stands out